by ArcturianCandidate
Very well structured, cleverly written, flowed seamlessly, gathering momentum and erotism, building the readers expectations of things to come, a refreshing change from the "usual," rape, impregnaton stories.
For a "first attempt," very commenable, i look foward to reading more of Alisons tryst.
Oh please come back and finish the story!! I have waited for a whole year now!!