All Comments on 'The Mix-Up'

Love to see the story continue…. Perhaps with mother becoming pregnant as a result of the unexpected sex with her son, as her boyfriend had had a vasectomy, and didn’t need birth control, and her being early forties…. But she ovulated, and one of her son’s swimmers had found it’s way…

And perhaps her assistant might get pulled into the relationship, to help her service her hung son? Maybe a mff relationship developing, where the assistant becomes the public relationship of the mff? Perhaps the two women can be pregnant together? Maybe the assistant is sub to both her boss and the son?

Great Work, and Glad you gave it a proper ending, some stories end just after the sex.

That was amazing. The gift mixup was a perfect setup for this story.

Hopefully next time they can start using more toys for their love-making.

I second collin4xxx suggestion. Would love to see mom im longterm relationship with son and pregmant by him. Love the idea suggested of a second female as a public figure forbwhat goes on behind closed doors.

Excellent story. More please of this one.

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You have a bit of a gift for writing. I look forward to reading more in the future. Have you given any thought to taking a shot a "real" writing? I think you might have a chance,

Unbelievably hot and erotic.

Hot! Good premise. Would love to see the illustrated version! Nothing hotter that a hot milf-mom/son tryst, Maybe bring in Yolanda for a threesome? Plenty of potential here.

Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us.

This was fantastic! I just wish that they did more than missionary on the intial sez scene though

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Please write a mom-son pee drinking story... Nobody writes it... Please.. just one for us watersports fans... A 12K words story... You can publish it as dry version & wet version, so both sides will be happy...

Nice equal amount of love and lust. Loved it. 5/5

Tres Hawt!

11/10 Fleshlights!!!!!

Other than the childish use of the word cunt it was a good story.

Fantastic story loves it!!!!

Great story!!

Three pages is a good length for these stories to be; we get story and great sex! Every time a story unfolds with a cock that needs unfolding, it gets me off! Son's got a big dick! Mom's a babe! What could go wrong? And yet it still takes a skilled writer to make it come alive instead of just lying there like yesterday's dead fish! You are such a writer: The dialogue sings with lust and, more importantly, love- it's the love story mom son stories that really wind me up. Thanks for writing a gooder!