All Comments on 'The Mix Up'

Interesting and a bit close to home

It was erotic for the most part, with her control, calling him humiliating names, etc.

OMG

Well done! I hope hear more about their time in the fun room—and when he gets home!

** A DIFFERENT APPROACH to a bdsm story and reasonably well written plus (in this fantasy world of erotic writing we all share) quite logical. 👏

** BUT THERE HAS to be some degree of realism. His friend Tom, also in middle management, can afford to give her $3000 a week for an hours session? 🤔 Let me know where the firm is and I’ll apply for a job there. 😂

** THERE’S A PORNSTAR by the name of Ava Koxx who fits the bill as an Amazonian Dominatrix and for Zoey to be 6’4” with a great body isn’t unusual.

Wonderful story - thanks

Pretty unbelievable, as all femdom stories are. A good alternative would be him turning the tables on her, totally dominating her physically, and making her realize she was never really a dominatrix at all, but a closeted submissive with daddy issues. As is, bleh.

Some part of me is wishing that she asks for intercourse and he says red, and uses what she taught him to become a good husband who communicates with his wife, and learns how to actually please a woman. And it ends with her bewildered at the unexpectedly successful result and considering a career change. 😂