All Comments on 'The Mobster's Toy Ch. 02'

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BlowPopJBlowPopJalmost 2 years ago

Chapter three immediately please!!!

TalkSexyToMe2029TalkSexyToMe2029almost 2 years ago

I love those 2. Broken and battered as hell but just what the other one needs. Pseudo necrophiliac Boss is either really psycho or has his own demons to fight (he obviously has a tiny bit of empathy and ethic left in him)... I can't wait to see what's going on next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow. Who’s in the room? What comes next?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Next chapter please ! Would love to see things work out between these two

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I guess it is the trophy wife.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Omg. What happens next? Need to know! 😘

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Excellent character development. I am worried from some of your foreshadowing. Don’t keep us waiting for chapter 3.

MysterreMysterreover 1 year ago

Ow, can't wait to read a peaceful loving future for these two ! It's such a hard beggining for them... Landon's emotions are so complex and overlwhelming, the situation seems so inextricable, that i still feel a weight on my stomach. I hope this guy in the end won't push them lower.

Very well written and describded as usual :). Thanks for sharing !

JoJo1975JoJo1975over 1 year ago

Damn I love this story, please continue it, I need to know what happens next. I love all your stories, thank you for sharing. Sending love and hugs xXxXx.

EdeyEdeyover 1 year agoAuthor

@Jojo1975

I will try to finish it, I already have a big chunk of third chapter, but I had an author's block, as the story is going very dark, so dark that I kinda... escaped from writing it :D But I will try to finish it, I promise :D Keep your fingers crossed!

GaiusErosGaiusErosover 1 year ago

Будь ласка, поверніть Іллю в могутні обійми Лендона

[Please return Ilya to Landon's powerful arms...]

sbstlmosbstlmoover 1 year ago

You write beautifully. Keep up the good work.

Moanster_Moanster_about 1 year ago

I love it!! Waiting for chapter 3.

vnx03vnx03about 1 year ago

I'm fascinated, I can't wait to read more, Don't abandon the story please!

Moanster_Moanster_about 1 year ago

Love it!!!💕💕💕 Can't wait for the next part!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This story is phenomenal! Looking forward to it very much

geemeedeegeemeedee11 months ago

It’s been awhile. I hope you continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Please finish this & the other stories you have left us hanging on. Your a great wrighter. But i hate cliff hangers more then anything.

Jerome_PlamondonJerome_Plamondon10 months ago

This was a very realistic development of the story. If I may guess, the hand touching the Beast belongs to the majordomo, not to Fiodor.

I am sorry that there were not more feedbacks. The authors receive no income from the site, their only recompense is praise from readers.

JoeBlow2023JoeBlow20235 months ago

Will you be writing more in this series? It’s good and hot!

EdeyEdey5 months agoAuthor

I have a hard time with this story, the plot is heavy and depressing, although it has planned HEA, but the road is long... and difficult.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Please finish the story! I loved it!!

EdeyEdey2 months agoAuthor

@anon, we'll see ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Need part 3 OMG that was great. I binged read all of it, I'm with your fans please finish the series.

SummerSammySummerSammyabout 2 months ago

Such a sweet story! And hot!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

We need a part 3, please 🙏

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I'm originally from Eastern Europe. I love to write stories in my native language, but occasionally I try myself in writing in English. I write mostly GAY and TRANS ROMANCES = love+sex stories, with twinks, femboys, t-girls and crossdressers, and _feminine_males in general. I ...

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