All Comments on 'The Moment'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
so good!!

More! More! More!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
GF?

I am always curious in stories such as these where I am left hanging. What's up with the girlfriend? Does he stay with Sarah? Is Laura pissed? Does he get both of them? So many endings...

JaysThoughtsJaysThoughtsabout 13 years agoAuthor
Yes I know.

It's meant to have many possible endings.

To be interpretive and to leave it open for continuation at a later date if it is well received. =)

LeaMattisLeaMattisabout 13 years ago
It has been well received

So please write more! :-)

Kat0511Kat0511about 13 years ago
Sexy and intricate

Very well drawn. I look forward to seeing more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Would really enjoy more of Jeremy and Sarah!

SampkyangSampkyangover 7 years ago
A cheating story?

Laura bewear jerry is a cheater and always will be...

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