All Comments on 'The Monster Hunter Ch. 01-10'

Great story as usual! You need dome editing on this one as narration keeps flipping from 1st to 4rd person, also some typos.

I’m hooked. This story delves into an evil that screams to be eradicated. Although some parts of this story tease the plausibility test, it’s still captivating.

Looking forward to the next installment.

AWesome Christmas present! Finding a new story from partwolf. Looks like a thriller, different than the ones I've read before. Please keep writing1 Thank you, Mike!

Very ominous beginning.

Omg i love this! I really hope they both get a happy ending :)

Interesting twist then ur normal stories cant wait for more

I'm not sure what to say to be honest. I'm not going to critique your writing, partwolf, you've proven to me long ago that you are a gifted writer and are well aware of any 'mistakes' you may or may not have made.

I will say though that I have read all of your stories and they all have spoken some truth to me. This one? Not only do I feel that I have discovered truth after truth, but I've truly learned many things tonight. I'm not sure what yet, as I still have to process it all, but I feel the need to express my gratitude. Thank so very much, not only for this story, but all of your stories. I feel you are a treasure and a blessing, partwolf, I hope you remember that at least one person on this planet feels that way about you.

Peace and Love,

Swifthawk

This is so out of your style yet so greatly done. Mistakes? yes but my ocd was able to handle it :) I'm shocked and for the first time it took me a week to end it. Very specific and dark. The end kinda, may hav hinted my thoughts that the monster is Angel's brother but let's see. Can anyone imagine the assassin being Angel or Michael's other personality? They easily have D.I.D. a.k.a. Dissociative Identity Disorder which is a person who has several personalities and can easily occur to a person with such past.

This story reminds me of Dexter. Love your stories, but so many mistakes in this one where "she" becomes "I" in the one sentence.