All Comments on 'The Monster Hunter Ch. 11-20'

Great story, really captivating. Thanks for sharing.

Amazing!! I have your Author page bookmarked & I check it daily for new chapters!!! LOVE your stories!!!

Absolutely riveting

My favorite kind of story, sex and intrigue! Excellent writing

looks like the beginning of another home run.

Tips tips tips tips... Secrets coming joining one another, place your bets the race is about to start. I got my stallion!!

I have loved every story you've written... some more than others... but this is the best one yet! The characters are well portrayed and very realistic. The plot is dark, but again realistic... the world has real monsters such as the pedophiles, those running drug cartels, rapists, murderers, etc. etc.

Since this is fiction, I hope the monster hunter doesn't get caught; especially if it's Michael... Of course I hope everything turns out great for Angel.

In the earlier installment you switched from third into first person a few times. Besides that, really good work. I look forward to the next installment.

Best, Dutch