All Comments on 'The Monster Pt. 02'

More please!!

i like ur stuff but there way way to short and spaced far apart it be better if there was more the just one page ish gets u hooked more

I love this especially the last line as if it’s normal it’s definitely a new normal

5*

Tc

Dr beulahthebrit; I'm sorry but, a 16" cock, GG, FF & EE tits, could not be bothered, if and I mean if you want anyone to read your stories, at least make the people in them believable. No one has 16" cock and although a few and I mean a few women have tits that big, they could not take anything that big in them, well not and survive the event.

Sure hope there's a part 3 and 4 etc!!!!!

READ your story if you are not using an editor. You change his name to Sam for a chapter.

This is basically Six Times a Day: The poorly written, reskinned and unrealistically sized edition. Minus the emotions, good writing, likable characters, and character growth. Granted, it's early so there's not much room for character growth yet, but I'm not hopeful. If you want a better version, read the original.

Gave it a 4 only because of the very slow pace of this story.... I agree 16" is too over the top.

The one page at a time story is not making it better. You just get into it, and it is over.

Those big balls got to be filled with so much potent seed!

Why not make his prick 8 feet long? I mean, you’re already past the point of any credibility, why not just own it completely? Just fucking ridiculous. Give us a break.

16" I get its ur story, but that too much it already kills it for alot of people. I mean yea Maybe 10 or 11 can be believed and worked with. Hell you could have used 9" and Very thick around because woman usually ststt swooning at 8 and thick or above

According to a recent search on Google, the World's largest penises currently belong to 2 men - actor Jonah Falcon (13.4 inches) and a Mexican man (18.5 inches) named Robert Cabreras.

Years ago we had a Porn actor who was supposed to have had the largest penis in porn and this was reputed to be about 14 inches (look up his exact measurement) and his name was JOHN HOLMES.

I can believe anywhere near either of these three measurements because this JOHN HOLMES was a thing of monstruous proportions when viewed on the screen next to any womans head.

Many will never admit to others but in their heart they know.

To build on animal99's comment the average penis length while hard is between 4 and 4.5 inches so 6 inches is already 50% larger than average

16 inches is literally 400% larger than average

Trashy slut sisters are not my thing.

You ever notice people want to quote penis length facts unless it is in the Trans or Futa category. It is FICTION you know as in not real. I bet you folks are fun watching movies going "That isn't real." smh

Why are all the tit sizes DD, EE, FF etc.? You know there are bra cup sizes with just one letter in them, right?

really good

You did SOME better with this chapter...still needs some editing and proofreading...

**4** stars...but I really like the whole 💡 idea you have written, and the cast!

There is a certain amusing irony in the fact that the parts of this story are very short.

This is the dumbest longest drawn out story of all time. This was written at the level is of a 7th grader if even that. Total wasted of time. After reading through chapters 10 I jumped to chapter 24 and 25 and realized how pathetic this became and chose to not follow it any further as the author just jerks around and never goes anywhere realistically. Not worthy of any score unless it could be rated a huge negative number.

Kinda reads like the fantasy of a 12 year old boy.

Really good idea but the grammar is atrocious and just kills the story line. Maybe incest was not the way to go here, mind control with a mind controlling cock(pheromones' maybe that awoke after first orgasm). That would add more realistic change to minds of sister, cousin and friend and why a teacher would do that in the first place.