All Comments on 'The Monster Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Keep going i like this build up! His harem is full of preggers!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Waste of reading. Five chapters and three had jobs, please!

Bronco56Bronco56over 2 years ago

This is a great story. Looking forward to many more chapters

5⭐

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

the story line is great but for each episode we have to wait .

BoxcarbillBoxcarbillover 2 years ago

So how long before Dr. Naomi has Sara sucking Jack's cock and she has her face buried in Sara's quim?

laughdruidlaughdruidover 2 years ago

Are you going to drag this out until the sun burns out ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

To long winded... Let the guy fuck already...

2Reader2Readerabout 2 years ago

Story is good. Written well. This family can’t speak to each other. This been happening for close to a month and still can’t say what they feel to each other. I like the control because it’s a little more normal. It’s unlike other stories where they see a big one and jump on it. It could use more non sexual activities to keep interest in the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I think physically and psychologicaly thw whole story is a big bs. In today's times, no teanager will lake an opportunity pass by without acting on it. The author seems to unnecessarily avoiding sex between family memebr to happen, when the whole point of the story is incest. The story is so borring and and too long.

5thRing5thRingover 1 year ago

This series is a cock-tease, so far. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

These characters seem pretty dense. I mean get a clue would ya.

SilvermireSilvermireabout 1 year ago

GET ON WITH IT !!! I'm getting bored.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This story is so boring. Who cares for this poorly written plot that hardly makes any sense?

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