All Comments on 'The Monster Pt. 06'

Whole lotta tease.

Taking way to long make it longer or more action

I can understand that many readers consider that there has been enough teasing and that the MC should have started fuc*ing long ago. But that said, I prefer this long teasing to that fast building up of those stories with dialogs such as: "you are hot, Mom, let's fuc*" "Yes, son, let's fuc* and I'll fuc * too your brothers and your friends and... Because your mommy is a fuc*slu* who loves fuc*ing." I hate that kind of story. I'm really sad that my opinion seems to be minoritarian and I'm afraid that the author might reconsider his plans and start writing another ordinary stroke story.

I think that if anyone is fed up with this long teasing instead of asking the author to stop writing it, should stop reading it. There are lots and lots of stories like the ones they seem to like. And there are so few like this one... If the author stops writing or changes the story then some readers like me would lose a story we are enjoying a lot.

I apologize if my opinion might offend somebody. That's not my intention.

By dumping fat loads of fertile cum in her!!

Forgettet it. This story is not going anywere.

Please keep telling the story you want to tell. There is enough instant gratification on this site elsewhere...

Great story. Please take your time, and build tension as slowly as you wish. No hurry. Thanks for posting!

Glad to finally see a MC truly trying to stick to his morals in a story of this type. I applaud the effort. This is already one of my favorites just for that alone. Thanks for sharing and keep the story going.

I agree with Morbidromantic. But I don't look at it as teasing. I look at it as a normal guy dealing with unnormal situations. Incest isn't normal, that's why it's taboo. So normal guys, even if his family are hot, sexy, whatever, wouldn't want to have sex with them. He may fantasize about them but wouldn't want to really do it. I've ranted a few times about stories where the MC is supposed to be this big strong willed person with morals, but when they are put in this type of situation they put up a token protest at best and then cave utterly within seconds of said protest. It completely ruins the fantasy (the characters are living in) when the MC crumbles like a complete wussy at the first test of these moral they claim to have. (by the author) But here we have the complete opposite of those characters, other than the morals, fighting a loosing battle with all his heart and all his convictions 'trying to do the right thing' by sticking to those morals. It makes for more believable story (even with the unbelievable body proportions) I applaud this author for trying to do what so many have failed to do and I hope he continues with the slow burn and the MC battles his morals in the situations he's in. We all know he will loose that battle in the end and we will get the sexy incest harem party going. I'd rather read a 20 chapter story where the MC's fight is real, then a 2 to 5 chapter one where the MC's so called morals are a lie. BRAVO

GOOD. LORD already... Are you EVER going to get to the point. Enough with the foreplay already. Somebody needs to fuck somebody...this one s going nowhere.

Please release another one now that is actually productive

Please add another part now that actually progresses

While I do like the current pace of this story, it is a story I've really become engrossed in within the last week and look forward to the latest chapter being released, I am hoping for just a little more advancement in terms of the sex. Part of the problem is the shortness of the story. Only one to two pages. Another part of the problem is the teasing. I mean, Sara is having to change her sheets every day because she can't stop having wet dreams about Jack. How long can that go on before she starts to find a solution to that problem?

I agree with what Morbid said. I'm liking the slow and easy. Although after finishing this chapter I thought , oh shit its over. Then thinking cant wait till the next chapter, so. Keep going as you are. 5stars

You've got all the building blocks and you're doing nothing with them. There's something to be said for anticipation but honestly enough is enough

I'm done with this story. Nothing is happening, same shit every chapter.

I really like the story, but the one of the ladies at least has to blow him soon.

The Suspense is Too Long. Let the action commence.

I agree 100% with Fuzzy_Kbear.

Low screen res are in your future. You’re dragging the shit iut of this series. Fuvk it, you list me snd just git a 1*

Not a bad story but it is taking too long to get somewhere

It's slow but it's getting somewhere. I like the build up. everyone is getting more horny and Jack's going to bang someone soon. But please please PLEASE, the pay off better not be 1 chapter of sex scenes and the series is done (Unless it's a 20+ page chapter full of sex) I hope for just as many chapters of him building a sexual relationship with everyone after the tension breaks

I'm absolutely loving this! It has me hornier than a horny thing on a horny day!! I just hope when the story breaks there is more action that I can manage haha!

The set up is great, but I'm giving up on this story, nothing interesting ever happens. The dragging out is ridiculous!

I am absolutely hooked on this series. The build up and back and forth is great. I also like the exaggerated anatomy and aside from Jack it isn’t the focal point of the story but a trait.

Totally awesome story, I can't stop reading it. I look forward to reading each new chapter.

I'm glad you didn't go with he blackmail route. It's been overdone and this doesn't seem like that kind of series.

Starting to get bored... Is anything going to happen, or not?!

I think Jack has a bit of autism. Some of his reactions remind me of the difficulty with social interactions and identifying certain behaviors that autistic people have.

What is this story? Is anything ever going to happen?