All Comments on 'The Monster under The Bed'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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PLEASE OH MY GOD WRITE MORE

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Yup, more, more, more please! That was incredibly good.

More!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More...

Ohhh god...best story i have ever read...want a sequel..may be Laura becomes a bride or something and monster breeds her.

nicholas4600nicholas4600about 3 years ago
Amazing!

Terrific story, would love a sequel where the monster now breeds her. Definitely following this author now haha

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Wishing for a sequel hehe

I must say I'm not a fan of very long stories in here, but this one... I didn't skip anything. The way you make dialogues is really good. Praise to you writer! I hope you write a sequel! :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This was absolutely incredible.

". . .every little kid thinks there's a monster under their bed!"

"But you happened to be right."

That was the first time I shivered when reading this. It was not the last. This is truly one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I can't imagine a more perfect erotic horror piece. Well done.

Wendywants2BtakenWendywants2Btakenover 1 year ago

Don’t you wish there really was tentacle monsters? I DO❤️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

wish I was Laura fr ✊

LonlysoulLonlysoulabout 1 year ago

Shit i love this one .need a monster under my bed too now

TrapperKeeperTrapperKeeperabout 1 year ago

Very well done! I appreciated that you thought of how Laura would need to get used to anal before feeling good with it, and the detail about getting throat fucked but still being able to breathe (why not if shes already fucked by an inter dimensional tentacle monster?). It also had some fantastic true horror elements: endless appendages, mysterious location, and being completely covered by tentacles. I really enjoyed this and hope you'll keep sharing!

ZambonilordZambonilord11 months ago

Nice. Very creative

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I hated how you called it "channel" multiple times. But it's nice to know that dogs can detect the Underbed Dwellers. Not that I would recommend this to any girl to rob her of the experience!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

There needs to be a part 2 to this

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I wrote my own story since he won’t release a part 2

bookworm2192bookworm2192about 2 months ago

Wow. This is fantasy fuel for the ages.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Holy fuck man where is the next part like common

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