by SatinSlip
Great story give us more. Finally something good and different. Hot as hell too. Except I wish he wasn't turned into a bunny. That is all I would change
Bizarre and sexy. As a gay man, I liked it before he was turned into a bunny. Also not sure you chose the right category, except for the gang rape at the beginning. Glad you did, though, cause I never would have found it otherwise.
Greatly enjoyed the story until the transformation, though I remained intrigued. Would absolutely love to read more gay fantasy stories about domineering monsters from you in the future.
I know I’ll get some negative feedback,but I liked the transformantion.
I hope you do more stories of these characters.
Great vocabulary and great writing. Loved the story. Hot sex. I want more. :)
I have read many erotic stories. But I must admit that I have enjoyed this work far more than any other I have read. AWESOME
Like many I lost interest at the bunny transformation. However, it wasn’t the bunny part of the transformation that bothered me. It was turning him into a female. For this four page story where the title claims he is the monsters sissy he was a sissy for at most one page and not at the end.. He was a guy, eventually a sissy, then almost immediately a female.
At that point it became just another heterosexual story.