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by HoneysLustfulDreams

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bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

Wow, so good and hot

PrfsrPrfsrover 9 years ago
Tense

Started out in past tense, changed to present tense.

HoneysLustfulDreamsHoneysLustfulDreamsover 9 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the constructive criticism Prfsr. I noticed it myself after I had submitted it. :) Something I will have to be aware of and correct in future submissions.

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