by Katiecat
You elegantly created a credible and sweet picture of the feelings of two real people, (coompared to all these emotionless robots we too often are presented with), and at the same time created the sexual tension that a good erotic story should do.
Thanks!
I've had this story half finished on the shelf for quite some time; it's actually a sequel to a story I posted a while ago that gives the background on how Carrie and Dave got together. If you like these characters, check out "A Gift For Her Teacher" -- I hope you enjoy it and I would appreciate your comments/votes on that one as well. //www.literotica.com/s/a-gift-for-her-teacher
I wish there were more 'morning after virginity' stories like this out there.
Have you thought about a 3rd part?