All Comments on 'The Morning After'

by Katiecat

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GentleVikingGentleVikingabout 9 years ago
Cute

A nice little story to start a Saturday morning with

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Yum

More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Short and good

You elegantly created a credible and sweet picture of the feelings of two real people, (coompared to all these emotionless robots we too often are presented with), and at the same time created the sexual tension that a good erotic story should do.

Thanks!

KatiecatKatiecatabout 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback =)

I've had this story half finished on the shelf for quite some time; it's actually a sequel to a story I posted a while ago that gives the background on how Carrie and Dave got together. If you like these characters, check out "A Gift For Her Teacher" -- I hope you enjoy it and I would appreciate your comments/votes on that one as well. //www.literotica.com/s/a-gift-for-her-teacher

TwilightfanTwilightfanalmost 6 years ago
Should be more

I wish there were more 'morning after virginity' stories like this out there.

Have you thought about a 3rd part?

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