by pakled
It seems as if your stories just cut out before something insanely great happens. (Please don't take any more ideas from Halo 2, really.)
Think you done a good job, thought emotions between Jer and Kathy could have been worked on a little more. True some of us men are dumber than a box of rocks sometimes. Still overall think you have embarked on a good plot line that could be worked into a series as Jer and Kathy travel thru space doing research of other species of life.