All Comments on 'The Morphant Ch. 02'

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timebomber427timebomber427over 11 years ago
Waiting Eagerly!

It seems as if your stories just cut out before something insanely great happens. (Please don't take any more ideas from Halo 2, really.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good story

Think you done a good job, thought emotions between Jer and Kathy could have been worked on a little more. True some of us men are dumber than a box of rocks sometimes. Still overall think you have embarked on a good plot line that could be worked into a series as Jer and Kathy travel thru space doing research of other species of life.

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