All Comments on 'The Most Wonderful Time of the Year'
by LimeyLady
- 6 Comments
jenorma2012over 6 years agoI guess it was about time for joe to get some of Angie But, I am waiting for the 3 way with Ruby and Charlie (if it is coming soon I hope) and when is Hev making her come back, I am starting to miss her adventures, can't wait for the next part
Anonymousover 6 years agoI love the way you write LimeyLady! I've read lots of your stories, with the saucy dialogue and the snappy retorts. You just captivate me! And I'm a guy. This one has all sorts of 'promise' to it-- feisty and combative. Can't wait...
LimeyLadyover 6 years agoAuthorThank you as ever for taking time to comment. The next part is going to feature an "out of the blue hook-up" with a totally new girl and the long-awaited date with Eileen (who really is going to "come on").
I honestly hadn't considered a 3 with Ruby and Charlie but you've now put the idea into my head. As for Hev . . . she's still two university years away from meeting Angie. I do, however, intend to make those years relatively rush by, although I need to make Angie become a lot more predatory. Maybe Hev will show in the part after next . . .
LimeyLadyover 6 years agoAuthorI'm glad you liked this story and others before it. As far as dialogue goes, I try to use the sort of exchanges I hear/see every day here in my part of the UK and elsewhere on national TV. The day-to-day stuff's not all sexual, of course (not all of it) but there are lot of sharp, funny people about in these parts.
Lonely_readerover 6 years agoAngie is turning out to be. Complex despite the relative repetition of each chapter's plot, or maybe just because, since it's evolving through every encounter she has.
I really love it, and I can't wait to find out what happens with this latest triangle.
LimeyLadyover 6 years agoAuthorI'm glad you are enjoying it and finding Angie interesting. I agree there is a certain repetitiveness about her sex life but am trying (as you noticed) to develop her as she goes. By the time she reaches her third year at uni I want her to be much more of an aggressor . . . She'll need to be, because that's when she's going to meet 18 year-old Heather Hunter, who takes no prisoners at all.
