All Comments on 'The Mother-In-Law Ch. 01'

by luvjuice43

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imhaplessimhaplessover 9 years ago
I liked it lots

5*

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 9 years ago
nice buildup and so-so culmination

A little fear and hesitation would add spice but oh well.

Tim413413Tim413413over 9 years ago
5 stars from me!

This is the only new LW story I chose to read today. Glad I did. It could have used a bit more proofreading/editing. Additionally, I must assume some of the tags will appear in later chapters. I prefer tags that only refer to the current chapter. Otherwise, some future surprises may be ruined.

Bob_AganoushBob_Aganoushover 9 years ago
very well written and very erotic

I look forward to reading more

connoisseur29connoisseur29over 9 years ago
****

Good writing and reading. Naughty but nice. As long as Marlene approves, what the hell. Cheers!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 9 years ago
A great start

I hope Marie shows just how honey she really is and fucks her son in law half to death.

OOAAOOAAover 9 years ago
Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please, continue it soon ;)

chytownchytownover 9 years ago
What A Story****

Hot bright lava flow earned you 4 stars. I did not know if I should laugh or moan!!! Good read thanks for sharing

flodnarflodnarover 9 years ago
Sharing the love

A great story. Look forward to chapter 2.

Edison3wireEdison3wireover 9 years ago
Damn hot

Marlene is such a nice woman to share

hubby with Mummy! YUP keep the love in

the family, can't wait to read the next 2

chapters. Thumbs up from an old biker.

shoeslayershoeslayerover 9 years ago
GO for it Marie!

A fine story,Mom knows her hubby diddled

a few women in his time and she happily

takes advantage of the situation her daughter

leaves her with. A HOT read, Thanks.

weaslbeakweaslbeakover 9 years ago
Erotic read

Thank you for the first story. Love the anticipation. I cannot wait to read the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Kick ass story.

I enjoyed the story, please keep writing.

jtwheelsjtwheelsalmost 5 years ago
Pubic hair thank you love it

Not bad 4 stars gave you extra star for hairy pussy

Lot of mother in law stories and with daughter's connivance

But decent story

roveroneroveronealmost 5 years ago
liked it a lot...

cool daughter, and also LOVE they're both down with full muffins, and sharing him-lucky hubby/son-in-law

looking forward to next chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
Grammar could have been better.

"A beautiful site" What like the Hanging Gardens of Babylon?

Or do you mean sight?

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

Many a man’s dream, nice little story simple but well written and thought out, I did like the characters and descriptions

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

A cuck fucks an old slut. “Great” story.

AnonymousAnonymous30 days ago

Missing willing cuckold tag => 1*

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