All Comments on 'The Mother Of All Sensuality'

by Jaymie_dee

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
amazing dude!!!

Whatta piece of work!!!!

masterpiece...I really feel this is a true incident

or else your imaginative power is awsome

I saw the whole thing like a movie in my head

and to be honest rarely have read somethin like this

5 Star

amazin

truly amazin

amie25780@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

the best voyeur desc I've ever read....and believe me, i've read quite a lot......thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
a wonderful mdiscription of a woman masturating and cumming

Made me hard and I had to stroke and cum as I read her orgasm develope and then she achieved it as I did too! You should write more of these storties and perhaps have her catch you and fuck you with those same movements!

kalodinkalodinabout 13 years ago
Lovely

As an arrested adolescent who did his share of peeking, I can't say I ever saw the vignette you've rendered. What I can say is it would have been life altering if I had. You've written a singlur piece. The less than 4 it carried into my reading must be,not the picture you drew, but growing out of the unfulfilled expectation of consummation many readers anticipated.

montywingermontywingeralmost 11 years ago
Pure Pleasure

A delightful experience for you,,,shame you were unable to follow it up and become intimate with her.

henrycarterhenrycarterover 4 years ago
Nothing Here

Not nearly as good as your other submissions.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Innocently Beaurtiful

So, this was written over 10 years ago and I just found it. Lucky me! I loved it. The story was soooo real. Imagination stoked but confined by decency. Haven't most of us had the same thoughts about our mothers? At least those of us who are lucky enough to have beautiful mothers that seductively smoke cigarettes and wear sexy nightgowns I grew up with this experience and it influenced my choice in a wife. It was fun to see my memories play out in a well written story.

OldbutboldOldbutbold5 months ago
very odd but somewhat enjoyable

By the sound of your letter you were one of the late to the party, (i may be wrong if so appoligies , i have worked out all the best places to witnes the females bodies from age 12 ,and as i had 2 sisters , mum , auntys and even my grandmother i was blessed with wank fodder for years well into my 20s , but i do agree those 1st few times were the times i tried to rationalize whether i was just a dirty pervert or as i later came to realize yes i was a pervert but also a heathy sex mad teen , and i grew to enjoy to the point where i was careless and my older sister caught me spying on mum , wellgave me more headaches than the crime was worth lol , but after a month i was back to my pervert days it has stuck with me for 50 yrs and still today try my luck lol

all the best

Tye

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A huge thank you to everyone who has read my attempts at erotic stories, and especially those who have commented and left positive feedback. Believe me, your support means more to me than I have words to express. I am completely amazed to see that my multi-chaptered story "Th...