All Comments on 'The Motherfuckers Club Ch. 03'

Keep'm cuming! Thanks for your time and efforts with the story.

Interesting story so far, but not sure if the gang bang slut premise is going to play out well. I'll wait for the next chapter before making my judgement. One question though, why did she need to take off her panties three times? Oh well, lost in the moment I guess.

I don’t get hooked on many series but you have me all in.

i love it!! well-written - very erotic. but hopefully no gang bang later - just more sex between the boys and their moms!!

5 stars!!!!

I love that you published two chapters on the same day! Great series!!

Great story. You have me hooked. I like how the characters are developing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Very entertaining sex scene, Thanks for sharing

Finally a story about a club, always thought this was a great idea for a story. I love what and where you have gone already. Hopefully you will explore every mother and son and their interaction with each other and with the other characters. Keep up the good work!!!

No holds-barred sex with Carole, and how hot it was, although I was surprised by her "back door" service to Ricky: I did not see that coming. You wrote their sex like they made love and sold it well.

Only thing I'd say is that I noticed a few reps of some phrases like "still had a buzz" and I thought Carole kicked off her g-string earlier only to see she still had it on?

It is an excellent story that I really enjoy. I just wish that you didn't need drugs to enjoy sex. At 64 yrs old,, I have never in my life needed drugs or alcohol to enjoy sex.

Ed

AND I LIKE IT, PLEASE KEEP IT GOING.

..THANK YOU..

USAF

You are getting better. Maybe your editor needs to do a bit better job given that Carole must have taken off that g-string three times (by my rough count). One issue I am still having is I find it hard to believe that Carole and Ricky had only had sex once before tonight. He should have been banging his mom ever night leading up to this. And he only did it once the first time? You are writing some very hot sex scenes but seem to be limiting it to some strange boundaries. 4 stars

Only a trusted, loving mother could give the son the confidence to make love before a group of people. From experience, I have seen public/sex before a group can be ego shattering. Total confidence in each other has to exist for the first time to be successful.

Hot as hell!