All Comments on 'The Mountain Ch. 09'

by MariLeigh

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So glad you came back! Can’t wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So happy to see this story continued! Another great installment.

AngelBelleAngelBelleover 2 years ago

Oh my gosh, you’re back!!! I loved this new chapter. I’m so happy you are continuing, this is one of my favorite stories. I cannot wait to see what happens next, were they telling the truth about what’s outside the island, will the contact have consequences? And now she is giving in to Warder but still defying him! This has updated has me fully back on the hook eagerly waiting for more. Thank you!!

EGRIEGRIover 2 years ago
Such a pleasant surprise

This was a great chapter. Francine is a hoot and of course we all assume we know what will happen once they fire that antenna up.

Life has been quite upside down for the past 18 months with COVID. Let us hope the meager trend towards normality will allow you time to compose and spare us a 2 year interval before the next chapter. Your story is about ready to come to a rolling boil so good health, free time to write and inspiration for what comes next.

Thank you

Jojo1981Jojo1981over 2 years ago

So glad you’re back! Excited for the rest of the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I hope she doesn't turn into a cock bimbo, but my hopes are dimming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Such a great story

I really should be sleeping but I saw your name and couldn't wait! I love omega verse but I'm so happy there is more to this story, very unique. Poor Lucy trying to figure out her feelings, her instincts and her mind.. I suspect this internal battle will continue and I'm enjoying the journey. Warner is so bloody HOT.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thank you so much for continuing this story, it's incredible!! Excited for the next chapter :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow! Brilliant chapter. This was a very welcome surprise.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

bucksumgalbucksumgalover 2 years ago

So glad for the update. I have read the story a few times since the last update. So I didn't feel the need to reread it before reading this little treasure of a chapter. Always willing to read more about Warder and Lucy!

bagsybagsyover 2 years ago

Fucking YES!!! So glad to see you continuing this story, thoroughly enjoyable. Can't wait for more

JoymacJoymacover 2 years ago

Yay! So glad to see true update! Great chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Literally squeed when my brain realized it was you, back! Thank you, thank you! You have been missed. 🤗

kiwiplumkiwiplumover 2 years ago

Wonderful story you're weaving, thank you for the effort

kdlucaskdlucasover 2 years ago

Even with the long break, you've placed me right back where I was three years ago. I hope to read more soon. You've crafted a wonderful tale.

rosaspinamrosaspinamover 2 years ago

I will quite simply perish if you don't finish this story! Thank you for coming back ❤️

Ellienora35Ellienora35over 2 years ago

So excited that you made a new chapter. I hope there are more coming. This is one of my favorite stories ever! Can't wait to see what happens next.

PurplePixie84PurplePixie84over 2 years ago

Yayyy so happy when I saw you’d posted this. I’ve gone back and read it all from the beginning again, and am super excited to see where it goes from here. I look forward to the next part!! 💜

BrazenpeachBrazenpeachover 2 years ago

I am so happy to see this new chapter! I love Lucy and Warner's story and can't wait to see where it goes! Thank you for not giving up on them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I’m so happy you’re back!! I always come back to reread your writing. I’m absolutely in love with this story!

MzBeaMzBeaover 2 years ago

Yeeessss!! More Warder! ❤

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yes!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So happy you came back! Can not wait for more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So very excited to see this continue

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 2 years ago

Yes!!! Welcome back! Of course we are still reading...after waiting for 3 years, it's such a relief and a thrill to know the story will be completed. Love Warder's dominance and care for Lucy. As much as he thinks he knows, he still doesn't understand human self-doubt that well. And Lucy, while definitely an idiotic fool, is so likeable. Got to love her fight and I'm looking forward to her realizing how much Warder loves her.

I don't fully trust ionni... he and sheera may be original warriors, with her being an omega. Something else is going on there. Lucy is going to be so hurt. At least that's my prediction.

Cant wait for the next chapter! Hope it's quick!

U4ia99U4ia99over 2 years ago

Please don't make us wait too long for ch 10!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

"Well, I can't give him the couch, dear. He won't fit."

when the council meeting was going on he was thinking about fucking her

and when she said they will know

he replied:-that i am thinking about bedding you

hahahaha i have tears in my eyes man that was funny

welcom back

lots of love to you ,warder and lucy my fav couple

early waiting for 10th ch

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good! Welcome back. Don’t let us wait tool long for the next chapter :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thank you!!! I love this story and I’m so glad you’re still writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm so glad you added a new chapter! Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

HELL YEAH WE LOVE TO SEE AN AUTHOR PICK A STORY BACK UP WRITE THAT SMUT QUEEN!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yaaaaaaaayyyyyy!!! So happy you’re back!

JasmijnJasmijnover 2 years ago

Thank you, this story is amazing!

U4ia99U4ia99over 2 years ago

So how long are we going to wait for the conclusion? Please let us know.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Omg YESSSSS so glad you’re back!! My fave story on here!! I hope you give us more chapters! Literally been waiting all these years checking your page often for updates hahaha

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I binge read this. Absolutely adore your work with this world building, even if you seem to doubt what you've done in your author's notes. o7

AmbuurleeeAmbuurleeeover 2 years ago

Omg! I saw this and thought it was some other writer and I was sooooo excited when I realized it was you. This is my favorite series I’ve read. I hope you continue. 🥺

Reborn1997Reborn1997over 2 years ago

Great story, glad you came back. I read this story years ago and came back to re-read it, only to find that you added to it. Hopefully we don't need to wait long for a conclusion!

curiosity_non_rovercuriosity_non_roverover 2 years ago

So happy you're picking up this story again. Your readers are rooting for you! No pressure though :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You have such a beautiful way of writing. It’s been such a pleasure to read this story. Thank you for coming back to it! I’m really looking forward to the next chapter but I’m happy to wait as long as it takes

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thrilled to see more! Looking forward to learning what’s really going on beyond the island!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yessssss you’re back I’m so pleased! Bring on chapter 10!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Completely enthralled.

Thanks!

Tess (uk)

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