All Comments on 'The Mourning Tree'

An interesting story and loveable characters. Really enjoyed it. Had a chuckle over the small town setting with everyone knowing who likes what and the latest news. Thank you. 5 stars. Good luck.

Damn good yarn! 5 stars.

Great heart warming story with all the necessary ingredients to keep the readers attention throughout.

Best of luck in the contest. I think it is a real winner.

Thank you so much for that.

This checked all the boxes and was absolutely outstanding. It’s one of those stories that really should be given a budget and made into a movie.

Great story, hope there will be a chapter 2 to finish the tale.

Than you for all the kind comments. It’s the appreciation of my work that keeps me writing. Crossing my fingers this does well in the contest 😉

You have two sweet, bring-your-tissues romances from darkoverlord6 and qhml1 out on back-to-back days. Buy Kleenex stock.

The author is a great storyteller - I'm hopeful that he'll continue to share with Lit readers for a long time!

Easily a top 5 story in the contest and a contender for the top spot even. Really well written and very enjoyable. Looks like I have more reading to do now. Even though I know you didn’t ‘win’ I still say congratulations on a very nice story!

all most passed over this 1. glad i didn't ! a man who lost it all found a way back.

A really lovely story with lots of nice details. Another 5 star story from this author.

I hope both of them, Nathan and Travis recover and get passed this. Sam may not be Travis' son but he needs him to be. They both deserve a second chance.

Terrific story!

Great story.

as the man Sam needed.

"Fuck! Yes! Ah! Nathan! You have no idea how bad I've wanted you to touch me like this...Oh! Baby! You're making my tits feel so good!"

A very good story ruined by this and other comments made during sex. Besides the fact that women rarely use the word ‘tits’ for their own breasts, both of their calls sounded too fake. I rather think she’d be a soft moaner and not one to scream profanity during sex. IMHO

It's such a shame that you aren't posting any more stories here on Lit. Your work is very good and much appreciated. This story was a great example. Thanks for writing 😊👍

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Hallmark Channel worthy!

11/10!!!!!

Cinematic. The minds eye almost sees it as an early Clint Eastwood film with Laura Dern.

This was so good. I loved it. Thank you for writing it.

'...rot iron fence...' Terrible malaprop.

The word you are reaching for is 'wrought' iron fence.