All Comments on 'The Move'

I really enjoyed the story, great job

I like the story. If there are plans to do another do it, but don't wait years in between.

I am a man, but this story makes me wish that I was a woman.

The writing was excellent and dwelled on the richness of the experience and did not exploit the naive young woman.

Keep up the fine writing and I look to be able to read more of your offerings!

Thank you for sharing it with us!

I really like your story "The Magic of her Smile", and thought I'd read this story as well. Although I do wish it were a bit longer, I really did enjoy it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

A very sweet story. It's a shame you stopped writing here.