All Comments on 'The Mud Bath'

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hotwillyhotwillyover 8 years ago
Brother & Sister

Nice story, well written, tender & erotic

daddy1950daddy1950over 8 years agoAuthor
The longer read

Thanks Hotwilly and for those of you who wish to read ‘Smitten,’ the original, it’s in the Romance section. It’s longer, a love story with a tad less sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hot

Very nicely written story! Hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Loved it.

It was much the way my sister relieved my of my virginity. Bless older sisters.

ROCKY70ROCKY70almost 5 years ago
The story is ok, BUT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~~~

PLEASE ,get yourself a proof reader, your stories read bad. thanks

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