All Comments on 'The Muse'

I loved this story,well written, thanks. Five stars.

It is so good getting a new story from you. I hope you are well and look forward to your next story. Thanks.

It was obvious where you were going when you described Tiffany as being so attractive and so mature for her age as a high school senior. So I went for the ride and enjoyed the fantasy of an older widower falling for a much younger woman who also becomes the Muse he needs so badly. What spoiled the whole thing for me was the supernatural crap of a ghost who gives him a regular blow job. An image of his wife in his dreams would have been acceptable fantasy, but the conversation on the roof and the sexual interaction was too much. I gave it a 4* because it was well put together, but lost the other * because of the ghost.

story. Interesting plot. Well written. Thanks for sharing.

A story I was not sure I would like, well surprise, nailed it to a "T", your on my favorites list. Thank you for sharing. Of course I want more, please.

Stars , as many as you want,

NorthPacific