All Comments on 'The Museum Piece'

Thank you for a beautiful love story. 5 Stars.

Great story!

5

Beautiful and heartwarming romantic story

5stars

sorry you lost me at the end of the second paragraph. I just had to quit.

You nearly lost me when she went with his friends. I literally closed the window and it took a day to re-open and read the end. Great read.

Went from a 5 to a 2 when she went with his friends. Very well written and great characters, just spoilt for me by her going with them and his reaction to it.

For me it went from about 4.5 stars to 2 stars when she went with Milos and to 1 star when he proposed. For others it is obviously different but that is very much not my idea of romance.

Stars were lost when she went with Milos. I was hoping Milos would have talked to her instead of fucking her.

Interesting story. It's difficult to come up with a difference scenario and I must admit to being tired of a partner's death being caused by being T-boned by a DUI. They made it perfectly clear they were having sex with other people so, although not a good idea in my opinion, she went off with Miles and surprisingly Blake let it happen.

Pleased they ended up back together and the scenes towards the end involving Caliasta were very moving.

5⭐

I note that some previous commentators marked it down for her going off with Milos, but he was metaphorically 'shoving her under that bus'. A conflicted man, wanting her to not love her, but hating himself when she acted like she didn't.

Regarding the partner's death. Yes Tboned buy a DUI is used often, but so is cancer and shootings. Also crossroads, signaled or not, are more fatal than other types when they go wrong, are common in cities, and she had to die of something to make the story happen.