All Comments on 'The Naked Filmmaker: For Dana'

This is a re-write of the story "Dana's Gift" a lot of people commented that I could do a much better job than I originally had.and that was certainly true. So I re-wrote it and here it is. Any comments you have after reading this story I would greatly appreciate hearing.

Thanks again!

Why don´t you write more about Tom. What does Tom think, why does he do it. A conversation between Tom and Sam discussing the project would be nice. Tell more about the feelings of the guys.

I do need to stop taking the Tom character for granted and explain his point of view better. It could be a very sexy story to write more about the way he sees and experiences these events. I guess I was hesitant to write much from Tom's angle as I am not gay and I think it would be hard to write from that viewpoint. I suppose, since it intimidates me a little, I should do it and overcome my fears. I will give it my best shot and hopefully it will not disappoint. Thanks for the comment and inspiration.

Hi author. You are really talented but if you want to write more stories and don´t want to become boring, then you have to tell more than only sex. Tell about the feelings. Tell about the characters. You have so much likeable persons in your story. I am a huge fan of your stories but don´t write only about sex.

Writing can be just fantasie - YOUR FANTASIE - it is your story! An erotic story with porn is much better than a story which is based only on porn. Sorry for my english - I am german.