All Comments on 'The Nanny'

Interesting future family dynamics if the relationship progresses...

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story!

Fantastic read. PLEASE PLEASE may we have an epilogue of sorts.

Wonderful story, hit close to home. My former fiancé was the brother of my boss... I was a private nanny/tutor. We fell in love while I working for the family and I was attending an elite university. I was poor, he was absurdly wealthy. We didn’t marry, in part because of the class divide, but the love was very real. I hope you do well in the contest.

Thank you.

Now continue please. Lots more to tell us about these people.

The story line was well thought out.

I loved it. Well done.

I'd like to read more of it but it may be difficult to build more to follow on as good as this has ended.

Thank you.

Great stuff. Many thanks.

Great story but begging for a conclusion

but it appears Daniel and Ursula have a future together. Well done!

I agree with the commenters who asked for a sequel. And by the way, good luck in the contest.

Brilliantly paced, good character development and believable dialogue. All the characters where well fleshed out. Enjoyed immensely. Thanks!

That was a bloody good job you did done with that story you old shagger

...but unfinished. There are many things to resolve. Please don't leave it hanging here.

I liked your story. The pacing was nice, and i found myself wondering if they would actually end up together. I'm in the anti-sequel group, though you told a story, beginning, middle, end. Write one of you feel like it, but this one doesn't need it in my opinion.

you've made the story for 10CC's I'm not in love here!

Loved it great pair!

This definitely needs to be turned into a full blown story! You can’t just stop there!!(whaaaaa), please? You have done an excellent job, please keep writing. I loved it!!

Great story - maybe too lengthy an intro to characters at the start for my taste - but good writing and what a great love story...agree with the comment about writing the next chapter for Daniel and Urs! Great writing - kept me mesmerised, and the ending warms the heart! Good work!

Your style and development of the story are both very professional. It is a real pleasure to read and enjoy the twists and tuns of the plot. I wish you every success.

Just, Wow!!

Pretense of being an English narrator but probably written by an American. Annoying use of non English phrases.

Hello Anonymous user! So to clear things up - I'm not English, you are correct. I'm Scottish! Bit of a difference, but not a huge one. Any 'non English' phrases used are at least common enough in Scotland that I wouldn't bat an eyelid at them. I assume the same of the English but frankly I don't give a shit. Next time I will post in Glaswegian slang to be more authentic. Pleasure speaking with you, xoxox

I really enjoyed this as well (previously read one of your others). Looking forward to seeing your “Glaswegian slang” story. But do include a glossary for us Yanks.

Great read, thanks for writing it!

I will immediately check the Duolingo app for a course in Glaswegian slang. English is not my native language so I might be able to learn one more that is foreign to me 😂