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All Comments on 'The Nanny Cam Ch. 01'

by KindredFlame

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Could've used some editing, but overall you did a good job.

But almost any mother/son story is smokin' hot, unless it's so poorly written it's hard to follow.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is truly abysmal. No structure, no characterisation, the awful dialogue is an afterthought and just no, no, no…

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Ok not the most well written story on literotica but with a bit of work it could be a lot better. However I did enjoy reading it.

I think this work has promise. Well done for effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Did not like this story the son should have stopped them !!! And it was to short just a 2

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