All Comments on 'The Nanobots Pt. 01'

Great story keep going . Maybe leave Sister alone as she witness what's happening around her without being affected by the bots,

Also he should increase mom nipples so much that she starts leaking milk again and increase her reproductive , the need to be breed by him.

Great story I hope you keep going.

Lots of fun, hope to see it continue! Thanks for posting

Love it. I can’t wait for part 2!

I hope you keep writing this story

This is great! Another chapter soon please!

So so hot can't wait for more please bring it asap

Chapter 2 please,

Definitely keep it going!!

Loved it. Minus the very minor typos, this is a fun premise and looks to be very competently written. Lots of potential with the character pairings, and in my view, seems to be unfolding at the right pace. Great job!

WOW! This story has great potential; please keep it going.

Great buildup....yep there MUST be a part 2!!

loved that got me rock hard

love it. please continue, any new direction will make this even better.

Great start! Very hot!! Five stars and a favorite point!

Love this! Please don't stop, please continue!

Please more, maybe changing mom physically?

excellent start, I just wish it has been longer. Premis and plot are good. Well written. Very impressive for your first outing. I cant wait for the rest of the story. I cant wait for him to mention something like he likes to see women in stockings and heels and mom picks up on it. Hot.

This story is so much fun. Different, sexy, light-hearted,please keep it up. Thanks

Great story please keep it going.

A slippery slope that could cause you to run this story completely off the rails or it could be a mighty beast of a tale. So far impressive with suspension of disbelief well in hand and much room to grow. I'll be watching carefully for the installment to come.

Great story so far. Can not wait to read next installment.

Great story looking forward to reading more.

desperately want to read part 2

Hell of a story. Very good, would love a series.

An excellent start, wasn't slow to start at all. Nice premise, good plot development. Please do continue the story! You really need one more chapter at the very least, preferably more. Can the Nanos pass from one person to another? Are there limits to the changes the Nanos can make? Careful, here -- no limits can push the story in directions you might find inconvenient, or too far outside the bounds of suspension of disbelief. Some inner turmoil or struggle with the changes can assist with that. Great start! I look forward to reading more!

Very good start, that has potential for more chapters. You should try and get help from one of the editors on the site. They will help you improve and help eliminate grammatical mistakes that sometimes can take away from the story.

Good job. Keep writing!

Awesome start! Welcome and please keep writing in this genre.

Great story!!

Amazing story. Please keep going.

Love science/sex + incest. Don't stop now . . . .

I've never really gotten the fascination with the Oedipus complex, in so many of these stories. I can more easily see the attraction to the young Aunt, Sister, or Cousin . The Mom thing escapes me. 3 stars for the nanobot plot, though.

Why did the son start making changes to a person without their permission and knowledge? It seems like this story could have made a very strong telling even with active participants, probably even stronger. Overall the writing was decent and the premise good. 4 stars

Great story needs more chapter