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by AntoniaHanrahan

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Cock

I couldn't get passed how many times the word "cock" was written. Please learn a couple new phrases for the magical member!

AntoniaHanrahanAntoniaHanrahanover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for that feedback.

Everything is in first draft, and not edited yet.

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