All Comments on 'The Nasty Wife Pt. 01'

oh my god, I love it !

please continue.

XL

Can't wait for part 2, and beyond if that's the plan. Interesting that Katy is upset her brother got off to a picture of their mother, when Katy's been told she looks like a younger version of her. That could lead to an interesting dialogue.

It's obvious by the fact that mom and wifey spend a lot of time together that they're doing each other. Their last outing was both "amazing" and "exhausting" plus they were both together for their day out while hubby and sister were home alone.

ooooooo, so deliciously nasty....:)

Awesome story so much potential

I remember reading this series on Hentai Foundry. Are there going to be new chapters now, or are you just reposting it?

More o' that, please!

a motherly cunt is heaven.

Hey, guys. Got a lot more of this coming!

Hope you can handle some twists and turns. ;P

Hang onto your butts...!

As I read this I became totally engrossed. I enjoyed the story and even chuckled at some of Miranda's verbal expressions. I hope you are going to continue with the story and in the same vein. Brilliant

Cant wait for th following chapters!!

No more polite pretending. Game on ! Excellent job by author. Full marks.

Love the dialogue and slowly building sexual tension. You definitely have my attention! Write on!

Just so yo know, using the same title for every story is lazy and non erotic. I'm not reading your stories because of that. Let me know when you change the titles so it says something erotic in each title. I know I'm not the only one that hates this. Lame.

to the previous comment are you serious you do realize that these stories have the same name because they are each chapters of a long story and not separate stories and if a stories title will be the only factor that is stopping you from reading this you are missing out on gold

I haven't gone on to the next chapters yet, so my comment refers to only this chapter. I thought you did a nice job of introducing the characters. I also like your imagination and your willingness to push conventional boundaries.I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters, as time permits, (even if they do all have the same title ;))

Do most authors think so little of men, that all male MC are so easily persuaded, manipulated, and coerced?!? Token protests, are used too often as a gimmick to raise the tension in stories. Men are usually stronger physically, so they should be able to stop things that happened in this story, but this MC is such a naive wimp, that a little double talk, and he might as well have been a 90lb. weakling going against a sumo wrestler with an IQ higher than Einstein. Not exactly an erotic image.

The browbeating of this dude by those cunts is really repellent.