All Comments on 'The Necklace Pt. 01'

A nice start. Let's see where this goes. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I look forward to the rest of the story. Thanks

when is the next part coming? storyline is qute amazing, keep it up.

Thank you for the kind words so far. Parts 2 & 3 will be posted as soon as I finish editing them. As of today, I'm about 25% of the way through Part 2. I have the full story posted on my Patreon (unedited). Click my username for details.

That’s too much energy for someone who just woke up from whatever coma like sleep she had, anyway great story

Things are going so well, so far

looking forward for the development of this story....See if she stays so bitchy. Especially when the food starts to run out....

Hooked again. Going on to next chapter. 🙂

I'm enjoying this so far. I look forward to jumping into chapter two.

Great start to a story. I love stories that take their time and don’t start off with two strangers meet and jump each other. Nice to have some mystery and context and a little emotional connection to the characters involved, even if I want to boot little miss metoo into the snow currently.

He is a pussy, open the door a d throw her ass out. Afterall she didn't

Want to be rescued by him ...

Good storyline! Two people with their own painful experience and compelled to share a defined space.

Reading this fantastic story again!

Reading again. Pretty sure the story is about my niece. 😁

Interesting tale, he saves her and all she can do is spit venom. 5 stars

Schwanze1, I got one of them too!

Hell yes! I love this! 10 stars! (Yes, i pressed the 5stars 2 times, i am a rebel)

Blankets do not provide warmth. They are an insulator that keeps you warm by retaining body heat. As cold as she was, wrapping her in blankets actually blocked out the heat of the fire and kept her colder, longer. They would only help if he had wrapped himself inside as well to provide a heat source.

I enjoyed the story otherwise!

Love it so far. And for anonymous below bitching about blankets: this is fiction you pompous ass. If it's not up to your standards go elsewhere and let the rest of us enjoy the story.

Some good deeds are not welcomed. Good so far. 5⛤

About the blanket comments. Yes, taking off her ice cold clothing, and his own, and then cocooning with a blanket would have been more effective. Still it doesn't file that everyone would know that. He might not have vhad rescue training, or experience that b8g of a blizzard paited with rescuing someone. Really People don't always do this the right way. Still leaving her in her cold clothing was unwise.

No good deed goes unpunished! This girl obviously has some deep seated issues. A well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Surely he should have offered a cup of coffee and some food.

re: Richard1940. Certainly not... & don't call me Shirley. I would have given this ultimatum @ the first cry of 'pervert'. "If you're unsatisfied with either the accommodations or company Your Highness, then there's yer boots, yer jacket's hanging by the door. return my broom and blanket. Good bye and don't let the door hit yer ass on the way out. I'll be locking up afterwards." If she's truly tired of living, I've got advise for that too...

Anon56

Very good build up. Interesting story. It appears this girl has some deep issues. Still, it's strange behaviour to get up from a coma and accuse the first person you see as pervert, especially since you know nothing about him. Stranger still that even after sitting a whole day behind closed doors, she can't think logically and give the man some credit at least for bringing her in from the cold, into a warm cabin beside a roaring fire and covering her up in blankets. She should have realised that if he really was a pervert, he could have done many things to her without bothering whether she lived or died. Either she is narcissistic, imagining herself to be such an awesome beauty that turns all men into perverts, or she has some deep psychological issues and the bruises on her body are evidences of that. And, in spite of her boorish behaviour, it was nice for him not to have kicked her out, because he was sane and mature enough to realise that her behaviour was due to some traumatic experience.

Anyway, nice start even though there's no sex here, and curious to read the next part. A well-written plot does not necessarily need sex.