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She crossed her arms defiantly. "Fine!"
"Fine!" I felt childish repeating her but I wanted her to know how serious I was about this. So far she had ruined the purpose of this trip and she needed to know that.
Without another word, I crossed the short distance across the house and walked right past her. This time she didn't so much as flinch at my close presence and let me walk on by without a word. I went into my bedroom and slammed the door, creating a thunderous roar as it echoed throughout that tiny cabin.
I felt like my trip had been completely ruined. Now I was the one holding out in the bedroom of my own cabin. I felt like a little kid again who was locked away in timeout for something I didn't do. I was angry and upset at how my planned trip seemed to have gone all to hell in such a short while. Of all the driveways in this part of the mountains, why on earth did she have to stop in mine?
More importantly, when was I ever going to be rid of her?
- COMMENTS
Anonymous7 months agoVery good build up. Interesting story. It appears this girl has some deep issues. Still, it's strange behaviour to get up from a coma and accuse the first person you see as pervert, especially since you know nothing about him. Stranger still that even after sitting a whole day behind closed doors, she can't think logically and give the man some credit at least for bringing her in from the cold, into a warm cabin beside a roaring fire and covering her up in blankets. She should have realised that if he really was a pervert, he could have done many things to her without bothering whether she lived or died. Either she is narcissistic, imagining herself to be such an awesome beauty that turns all men into perverts, or she has some deep psychological issues and the bruises on her body are evidences of that. And, in spite of her boorish behaviour, it was nice for him not to have kicked her out, because he was sane and mature enough to realise that her behaviour was due to some traumatic experience.
Anyway, nice start even though there's no sex here, and curious to read the next part. A well-written plot does not necessarily need sex.
Anonymousabout 1 year agore: Richard1940. Certainly not... & don't call me Shirley. I would have given this ultimatum @ the first cry of 'pervert'. "If you're unsatisfied with either the accommodations or company Your Highness, then there's yer boots, yer jacket's hanging by the door. return my broom and blanket. Good bye and don't let the door hit yer ass on the way out. I'll be locking up afterwards." If she's truly tired of living, I've got advise for that too...
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Marklynda2about 1 year agoNo good deed goes unpunished! This girl obviously has some deep seated issues. A well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
Anonymousover 1 year agoAbout the blanket comments. Yes, taking off her ice cold clothing, and his own, and then cocooning with a blanket would have been more effective. Still it doesn't file that everyone would know that. He might not have vhad rescue training, or experience that b8g of a blizzard paited with rescuing someone. Really People don't always do this the right way. Still leaving her in her cold clothing was unwise.
