All Comments on 'The Needs Of A Mature Woman'

by Machu_Gamesmas

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Nice start but...

You may want to have one name--Mike or Matt...

Machu_GamesmasMachu_Gamesmasalmost 10 years agoAuthor
LMAO!

Sorry bout that. I didn't even notice till you pointed that out.

rightbankrightbankalmost 10 years ago
For a minute or two

I thought Matt might be the name of the husband.

auwingerauwingerabout 7 years ago
Rough draft?

Was this a rough draft, because the young man's name switched from Mike to Matt toward the end of the story? Nice story, though!

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