All Comments on 'The Negative Seduction'

Absolutely wonderful - although it could end here, PLEASE give us more!

I have ever read on Literotica. I hope you give us another chapter.

Thank you for an excellent tale of romance here. Ttom

This is the absolutely best erotic story I have ever read. There are others close, but this is numero uno. Oh My Gosh, keep writing.

I would like to rate this one higher. Fantastic story with the teasing, et. al. The pace was great. I easily identified with the characters without the story becoming droll. Congrats on an enjoyable erotic story.

Welcome Slowride and congratulations on writing the best first submission erotic story I've ever read. The tone, the pace, the character development was tack sharp and pin neat. I look forward to enjoying many more submissions.

As a fellow member of the 714/949 I proudly say "well done."

Definitely one of the best stories I've read on here. We need a lot more men with this attitude out in the real world.

The most passionate lovemaking I've ever read. I'd like to read more of these two. Thanks. ML

Excellent first submission! Really enjoyable writing. I felt the buildup along with your characters. Identification with the characters is what makes a story come alive, and you were able to accomplish that. I look forward to future submissions.

Loved your story...hope to see more.

The best story i've read here! I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you could have make it longer. I still want some more! Hehe.

...and its almost a year old? Very good job. I hope inspiration hits you again soon and you have the time to wallow in it. :-)

Great build-up with this story! Would love to see an example of what Linda looks like too... The descriptions were wonderful, but it's hard to top a photo. If only...

I hope this is true. Great story

Linda needed to be fucked but she needed to trust first. Chris' buddy gave him the right way to gain her trust. She was horny for a year with only her hand to gtve her orgasms.I never heard of puffies but they sound very sexy!!I hope this is real and she went overseas with him as his married woman.What a great story!! The author has a great personal memory or knows two peop[e who do!!

My cock is longing for Linda!

Great story. I hope it is true and they had a long hot relationship.

This story had me searching within my soul....will I ever be able to make love to a woman as sensual as Linda? One day.....one day for sure.

This is an amazing story. The passion, the sex, the moans. You had my pussy clenching all the way through. Truly brilliant. Can't wait to surf through your profile and read more. Got a feeling that I'm going to love your stories.

I loved it! Congrats! Well done!

It's a darn shame he's getting shipped out, but at least he showed her what she was missing.

A beautiful story!

Chris is one dream guy. Lucky Linda :)

this is a wonderfuly written story and would love to read more written by you.

Sadly it stands by its lonesome self after all these years

Would that I could call you Back to write some more!

Chilley

Good things come to those wait and work and treat people properly.

Over the years I have read thousands of Literotica stories. This is the best (or one of the best) I have encountered when it comes to a loving, patient, tender, knowledgeable, hot episode of sex (frenetic scenes are OK, too, but I prefer the slow-burn, gentle ones like this).

To make it what it is, required the setting of the situation and people of the whole backstory. Very clever! In fact, unbelievably good for a first submission.

The bittersweet is two-part:

1) it needs some follow-up. Roommate Paul's reaction. The gossip of the secretaries, including Harriet -- Andrea telling Chris the impression she got from Linda. Where did it go -- both for his remaining time and then after he went to Germany?

2) We are introduced to one of the best candy bars ever, immediately want another, and find they are no longer in production.

If we cannot have more from Slowride, would a Literotica writer please give us chapter 2 in the same spirit as this tale? I bet Ohio could do it, or Cat5, or Thucydides, or MoogPlayer, or ....(many others)

Paul in Oklahoma

I would be happy to invite a follow up written by another. I'd even be willing to share backstory

Amazing how this technique works sometimes

It's a "don't throw me in the briar patch" or reverse psychology which causes some people to wonder why things aren't going the way they thought they should have. Then little chinks of their armor open up and they're hooked. Great story, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. One of my favorites.

What a wonderful warm story. I only see this one story but I would love to see more stories from you.