All Comments on 'The Neighbor'

Really cute, well written April Fool’s story, that was even more subtle than I expected. I suspected you-know-who of being a plant but thought Cassie’s sister might be behind it (and I was looking forward to that reveal!). This was much more logical and well-thought-out and resulted in a great happy ending. Very well done and best wishes in the contest! 5*

You never disappoint, 5 stars all the way. Good luck in the competition :)

So, they start out, with him coming over prepared, condom in his wallet and using it. Then suddenly she's pregnant, and they act surprised. Like, she didn't know that if somewhere along the way, if he ditched the condoms, that would happen? Luckily, he's into the idea. This could have easily gone into the Romance category as well. Quite enjoyable as either. A few really tiny errors, easy to overlook, like "we made love like there was tomorrow." Other than that, very nice story.

Great story. Reading the sex scenes had me as wet as she was.

One goof though: When he came out from under the sink with the scratched, bleeding hand, she proceeded to wash his hand, but no one ever turned the water on again.

Absolutely enjoyed it, thank you.

Note to no one in particular: do people understand precautions? So many stories, so many surprises.

S&F lives up to their name again! Great work.

What a sweet story. It should have been a Valentine story... :-)

*****Great piece of storytelling with a great storyline. What a entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

good story and easy to believe that she would think it was april fools when she found out his uncle was her new neighbor, but never asking betro

One of the best I’ve read in a loooong time - thank you so much. Sampling more of your work is my next task…

Hi JayDee_Dunn. I would love to return the favor and read some of your work. Hope to see a story or two of yours on here soon.

I always love your writing. thank you for sharing!

Very enjoyable. Not as kinky as my stories, but still fun.

Absolutely loved this story! Was such a joy to read! Thank you for your work

A good read. 😁

I really liked the story, it has everything love, lust, sense of betrayal and a happy ending.

Really good work, well done.

Very nice sweet story. Thank-you

I loved the story. Thanks for sharing it.

Cassie wasted little time jumping into bed with the "handyman"