All Comments on 'The Neighbor Girl and Her Friend'

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Your writing is awesome! You just hit another one out of the park. Man, wow, are you sure that you're a new writer, because the way you spit out a story suggests otherwise. Once again i'm in awe of your talented pen. I can't wait for part three. Keep em coming!

Thank you, from miss silver766

Thanks for the kind words.

This was the first story I wrote a few months ago and originally posted on a different site. I enjoyed reading the stories on that site and decided to give it a try myself. It takes me a while to get motivated to write one, but once I find a topic/plot that inspires me it comes out pretty easy.

The third Neighbor Girl story is pending and I have another series that I will post as well...probably in a few chapters.

This comment is for the person that sent me feedback on this story.

This was exactly the 2nd story I’ve posted on this site so I am not real familiar with the way everything works. I apologize that not calling out this story as a “part 2” in the title sent you off the deep end and caused you to send me a ranting email. I didn’t realize that not following YOUR rules for posting stories would cause so much hatred in your life….not my intention.

As for the rating of 1, I don’t really care. I write the stories because I enjoy writing them. I posted them here because I enjoy reading a good story so I figured I’d share what I wrote hoping someone might enjoy it as well.

I changed my most recent submittal to hopefully address the issue you brought up. Next time you have feedback like that, try not being such a prick and try just telling the author a better way to title their story.

I hope you enjoy part 3 once it’s approved.

I haven't figured out if I can edit the first to parts of this story, but If I do, I'll change those as well. I understand your concern even though you did a terrible job of expressing it.

Please more! This is great stuff. Sure, a couple of typo's but seriously - compared to some of the stories on here, this is excellent!

More!

Just mindless prattle. 1* !

my pretty neighbor likes girls.she leaves her bedroom window open at night.i hear some wild sounds at night.she has lived next door for about a couple of years.i really like her.for the heck of it I asked her out for dinner&she surprised me she went with me.we had a good time.we got back to her front door&was saying good night.she hugged me&i don't know where it came from I said we have lived next door to eachother for 2 years I love you you are a fine person.she got the shocked look on her face&her eyes got big.it was the first time a man cared&said I love you..she grabbed me &dragged me into her place.she ripped her clothes off&pulled mine off.she said say that again.i said I care for you&i love you.she screamed&threw me on the bed&screwed the hell out of me.she wont let me go she adores me&we got married.i understand she is bisexual.i let her have sex with one of her female friends once a month&they let me watch.last night they were having sex&told her I love you.she yelled&started moaning&having a wild orgasm.you see no man cared&said ilove you.she wont let me go.i am her man.

Dreams,