by Innateecstacy
@ all
I have edited this story with the help of some feedback I received from readers. I have submitted the edited version, it will be published after 48 hours.
Great story...different but I liked it.
If you'd like, I'd be more than happy to work with you on the editing of future stories.
Thanks a lot for the offer, I'll surely let you know if I need any help with editing.
I'm glad you liked the story, I started writing few days back and this is my first writing experience so it means a lot for me. I'm learning from whatever I read and trying to improve.
A special thanks to my editor, exjohn, for helping me with his editing skills and feedback. It has improved the quality of my story significantly. I really appreciate it.
I don't know how to add this note in the story, I had included it in the note to the admin but I don't think it was published. So, I'm mentioning it here.