All Comments on 'The Neighbour's Wife'

by Nicolas_De_Lenfant

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Poor!!

" ...slide my hand slowly up the back of Amy's dress and lightly touched the soft silky underwear she was wearing. I could feel the shape of them tight around her pussy and the soft skin around the edges of the material. "

You go from stroking her back to feeling her undies round her pussy, all whilst both standing facing, and talking to, her husband?

You got double length arms, or feelers, that you can go from back right round to front?

Also, "... a steep pathway followed by a short road that lead right into the town ..." - LED, not lead!!

"... I took her hand and lead her like a princess ..." - LED, not lead!!

Nicolas_De_LenfantNicolas_De_Lenfantalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Anonymous critique

To 'anonymous'

This is a pornographic literature site, not an English language class or a discussion on realism, in pointing out the point of this site I will ask you kindly is the nicest way I can, to go fuck yourself, as that's what this story is for helping with.

ScentualEncountersScentualEncountersabout 6 years ago
Wonderful!

I really enjoyed this story! Thank you for sharing it. Keep writing, love your perspective and voice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
we're?

WHERE

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