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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
That was a surprise!

Well done. The ending was a total surprise, and as you are promising a series, I hope to see how you develop the story-line.

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ajdehooghajdehooghalmost 4 years ago
Nice

Nice start to the story...looking forward to more!

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A soldier back at his typewriter who dreams in Technicolor of worlds imagined where only pleasure reigns and love forever rules. My former lovers and I have previously published under the pen names of TheGlobalSoul, The Lost Angel, Deckard Kincaid, and LaFemmeErotique, and La...