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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Kinda thin...

For nine pages I expected some type of character personalities and purpose to this story to emerge but so far nothing. Just thin weak characters being blackmailed one after the other, after the other, after the other, after the other, after the other, after the other (if i counted correctly) into some non-consensual activities. I hope there is some substance soon.

JadestoyJadestoyabout 7 years ago
I agree

With anony. Needs more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Dissapointed

It started so well . Built up nicely , then the ending let it down, unless there's a sequel.

I hope there is one as this story deserves a good finale .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Character development, who needs it!

....in a great stroke story like this. Love it. More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Lost the vibe

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