All Comments on 'The Never Series Pt. 04'

This long, but ultimately richly rewarding story, really surprised me. Unlike some other readers, I was fine with you ending the story after Part Three - Caroline's betrayal of Chris. I imagined what came after that in a number of different ways: Chris reconciles with Caroline when he finds that Tanya was behind the theft of his story (I got that part right!); he brings a lawsuit, but loses. I hadn't, however, expected him to find another woman, and Paige is more than worth the wait. As always excellent character development, dialogue, and steamy sex.

This is wonderful story from start to finish, but I particularly loved this section. Not your typical fuck and suck tale, but instead an honest and, at times, touching examination of human interrelationships. The anticipation of Chris and Paige's inevitable rendezvous builds and builds as they get to know each other, and when the sex does come, it is hot and explosive. Another excellent tale told by a skilled writer.

I definitely had no idea where you were going when the last chapter ended. This was great. Thanks.

This has been just what I needed today. Well written, with a good twist and good heart.