All Comments on 'The New Babysitter Ch. 03: Caprice'

I really do not have anything that I really hate about these stories other than the length. Just as I am getting into them they are over and I am screaming no in my head. Other than that I am liking the pacing and descriptions so far all that I ask is that you think of adding a bit more length to the story looking forward to the next one

Great comment and something for me to think about. Is it better to publish in small bites of one or two pages, or longer single stories of six to ten pages, or, as I did in the Stacy stories, publish several shorter stories at the same time to make the whole?

I am in for the life advice. Not the pornographic plots.

That's the part I like to write about. Feel free to send me a private message, or post, with any suggestions. Getting the mix of sex to commentary right is tricky - one of the things I keep working and revising. Thanks for your great comment!