All Comments on 'The New Babysitter Ch. 04: Denouement'

I'm glad you gave us an ending to this story. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the shout-out, MonkeyKingLives! Congrats on this. I really enjoyed this denouement. We have solid comedic timing here. I loved the line about revenge being best served hot. There are some gentle moments too—for example the way that you resolved the “crime scene” (LOL) in the hallway. Theres also some good advice being given. It is tough to strike a balance between parody and erotica, while still giving your audience the titillation they’re here for. You’ve done that, and also imparted some wisdom. The narrator’s dating advice is insightful. And I think you resolved the “crime scene” (LOL) in the hallway very nicely.

cheers,

petite

I hate that I check these multiple times and still miss something.

I hope you enjoyed the story. Please vote high and favorite the story; it is encouraging.

Like someone else said ty so much for closing it out. Great story. Maybe someday we can meet the new babysitter ??

Great story, loved it