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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
hmmmm

intriguing enough, but perhaps not quite the right category - more like mind-control ?

MishaPearl2MishaPearl2almost 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks

The category is "taboo" because of the abuse of the power relationship and the trust breaking. I didn't see the "mind control' category...thanks for reading. Additional chapters are forthcoming. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Incorrect catagory

It should be listed under mind control because he used hypnosis to influence her mind and decision making.

junren65junren65about 7 years ago
Very good writing but...

...I thought the guy was a real shithead. Perhaps because of my career. I think I need to avoid this form of taboo.

MishaPearl2MishaPearl2about 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks Junren

I appreciate your comment. Not all protagonists are 'heroes' and Carter is certainly a vessel of flaws. :-) MP2

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