All Comments on 'The New Girl Ch. 03'

Why can't you give longer chapters?

So much suspense, and is Freya helping the poor MC?

Keep up the good work!

It needs rape, non consent, and gay tags

Again nah

I'm fine with some female dominance, but not extreme dominance and/or rape. That being said, this chapter has opened up alot of different possibilities. So I'm still olding out some hope that this as a whole ends up being a good story

Wow. Okay that was nice of her to do. Maybe going forward we can see a softer side to her especially to the main lead.

I don’t know if freyja is meant to be evil but part of me hopes she has some type of redeeming quality and actually ends beating the hell out of or killing the coach.

Wouldve prefered no male on male rape, futa on male is fine though

Love it and can not wait until part 4

Its good

Please add a "rape" and "male-on-male" tag.

This chapter kind of ruined the story, and you really should have put up a warning for the gay rape wich this isn't supposed to be in the transgender & crossdresser

I want to see her have remorse and kill or beat up the coach and comfort the boy. But maybe this ain’t that type of story and she is just going to be a psychopath the whole time

Can't wait for the next part.

Hey peeps, lesson learned! This is useful feedback, the changing of the niche. I did not detail that scene as it was pure story-telling, in future if I use a similar plot detail, it will be a threat rather than an actual event. There is no further male-male in the rest of the story, it was purely for story's sake! Peace and love, xoxox

Jesus fucking Christ on a bike, never in my life have a lost an erection faster, I can't even read the rest of the story in that way anymore. Excellent storytelling and an entertaining read, still finished it just fine, but I had my pants firmly up for the rest of the story. I need to take a shower or something, sheesh.

If that happened to any guy, within ten minutes he would decide to skip detention of have a weapon with him when he arrived. That's an automatic reaction. Why is it writers often just say things like, "with no other option he made his way....."

Rich, fat and disgusting. Am I seeing a stereotype? 😆

This part is even more terrifying (horror), this time it's a real rape by a teacher and in addition showing that money matters more than the good of another person, let alone a student. Maybe I'm from another world and I know what it's like to experience violence, rape ... the fact that this part is well written, its content is terrible for me.

SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland.

Ta część jest jeszcze bardziej przerażająca (horror), tym razem to prawdziwy gwałt i to przez nauczyciela a w dodatku ukazanie że bardziej liczą się pieniądze niż dobro drugiego człowieka a tym bardziej ucznia. Może jestem z innego świata i wiem jak to jest doświadczyć przemocy, gwałtu ... to że ta część jest dobrze napisana to jej treść jest dla Mnie straszna.

SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska.