All Comments on 'The New Girl Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wonderful, so worth waiting for, Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

My favourite story.. I'm looking forward to the next part

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very good story. I hope their lovey divey-ish relationship continues.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great turn of the Story! One of the best chapters yet, I think! Eager to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Amazing, please continue.

ThalaxianThalaxianalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Yo, to whoever this concerns: someone has messaged me twice wanting to discuss commissions, and I have emailed you twice, so check your emails! Otherwise, my email is thalaxian@gmail.com. Peace and love, xoxox

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hope she gets him pregnant.

kinks1276kinks1276almost 2 years ago

eargerly awaiting part 6

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I really enjoy this story. Please continue to write additions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is excellent! ^.^ Continue pls! :)

Do you by any chance have a patreon?

ThalaxianThalaxianalmost 2 years agoAuthor

@Anon I do have a Patreon, go check my blog link in my profile, it has all my various things! Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Next please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Glad the rape is over. I found this story looking for futadom, but I'm not a rape fan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The constant "bitch boy" commentary by Freya is getting a little stale.

Calling others derogatory names is also a strong indicator of an insecurity complex. An attempt to dehumanize those around you to make yourself feel better by comparison. It takes away from her apparent physical superiority and shows her to be emotionally and mentally fragile.

Something that I'm sure has already been planned to lay out now that her family has been brought up.

Not hard to see where this one is going.

Only_a_readerOnly_a_readerover 1 year ago

Wholesomeness has come. Welcome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's great that there is no more rape, violent violence and friendship between Freya and Tom and each of them accepts it. The description of the meeting at Freya's house shows that they both have feelings for each other more than just acquaintance or just sex, and Frey's use of names for Tom, such as female dog, loser or fag, is only in my opinion showing mental fragility or a desire to show his superiority, and maybe fear of being hurt by someone else.

I'm like Tom and I've grown accustomed to him (reading this story I could insert my name and it would be like my own). I am very impatiently waiting for the further fate of Tom and Freya, I wonder what will come of the friendship or maybe the love of Freya and Tom. SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland.

Super że już nie ma gwałtu, przemocy ostrej a w ramach przyjaźni pomiędzy Freyą a Tomem i każde z nich to akceptuje. Opis spotkania w domu Freyi jest uwidocznieniem że oboje mają ku sobie uczucia czegoś więcej niż zwykłej znajomości czy tylko seksu, a używanie przez Frey nazw dla Toma, jak suka, frajer czy pedałek to tylko według Mnie ukazuje kruchość psychiczną albo chęcią ukazania swojej wyższości, a może obawa przed skrzywdzeniem przez kogoś innego.

Jestem jak Tom i zżyłem się z jego osobą (czytając tą historię mógłbym wstawić swoje imię i była by jak moja własna). Bardzo niecierpliwie już czekam na dalsze losy Toma i Freyi, zastanawiam się co dalej wyniknie z przyjaźni a może już miłości Freyi i Toma. SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska.

ColonelinguistColonelinguist4 months ago

The way I see it, Freya’s verbal assaults, used to humiliate Tom is really a cry for love. It also makes your descriptions; particularly when he’s being sodomize and does is in fact agree that he is own by Freya and needs; even enjoys being her bitch-boy, so super hot. I can do with plenty more servings if, thank you!

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