All Comments on 'The New Girl Ch. 10'

You've really taken an interest in the cuckolding dynamic I see? I recognize Irina a little bit in Morgan especially when it comes to confidence and apparently breeding fetishes. At least Tom can’t get pregnant unlike Maddie. Can't wait for the new chapter for that story too.

Love it. Been avidly following this and have been having fantasies about being Morgans !

The new girl....? So where is she, did Tom tell Freya about his night in the kitchen? Are there going tobe endless chapters of Tom on his knees as he shared by one and all. This story while it has been very entertaining has gone sideways so quick and with so many " schlup" words I don't think I will be back

So Tom is monkey branching up to Morgan? Is he going to end up with the psycho grandmother?

If Morgana becomes the father of Freya's children, then Tom will be happy raising Morgana's offspring. He loves her seed.

Nice! Competition is healthy!

This is my favorite chapter yet. Love Morgan's brand of dominance, and you've portrayed it in a very appealing way.

Love the story .but this chapter not so much Freya deserves better. Imo

This story definitely needs to end with Tom getting impregnated somehow by Persephone and/or Morgan, or at the very least owned & branded by them. Freya is a total cuck loser at this point and it's for the best; she doesn't deserve Tom's love or skill, she just happened to be in the right place at the right time.

@Anon7734E In this case it's sharing, not cucking! Freya will have the reins, don't you worry! It's part of a story arc! @kindzaza I don't plan on any of the futanaris impregnating one another, haha! @chris2k As noted, Freya's not cast aside! It's a bigger picture, and Tom is "part of the family." Wait and see! @Anon(s) Enjoy the free stories you pay nothing for, I'll write how I like, thanks xoxox

@Thalaxian you say that but after one conversation with Morgan Freya shares him after warning him day's earlier that he should have nothing to do with them because they are dangerous, this process feels extremally rushed in my opinion and takes from Freya's protective nature that we were shown early on in the story if anything the sharing should have happpened months after he moved in instead its right after he gets their so it comes off as her family using her to get to her lover and mock behind her back for being "weaker" and I'm sorry but Thomas should stand up for Freya more as both her lover and loyal sub, no sub that has any loyalty to them would roll over for another dom this quickly if they truly cared for their dom, considering dom/sub relationships are all about loyalty and trust and he has neither for anyone in Freya's family but her.

@Anon Hey man, see where it goes! I appreciate what you say, but the reality of any story like this is that time is fairly nebulous and while realistically "months" is reasonable, this is a fast-paced smut story! The next chapter may clear your worries a bit, Morgan is a fair bit more complicated herself. I would also note that while what you say on D/s relationships is true in reality, this is also a sex story, and realistically no D/s relationship - any healthy one - would ever begin with one partner raping the other. Forgive me, but a lot of people who whine about "cucking" do not seem to understand what it is. Irina Blackwell is cucking Theo, but Morgan is certainly not cucking Freya, definitely not in the bigger picture. That said, I appreciate your passion! This one is popular with my Patrons, and will likely continue to be until it's end (and that will not arrive until Theo has banged/been banged by everyone.) Have a great day/weekend xoxox

Can I get a summary of this series? Because I'm not gonna read it as it is not the kind of stuff I like, but the sex is really hot, so it got me curious.

Hey man. I really love this story a lot and am super invested in Tommy and Freya's relationship. It makes me sad that Freya seems to have been almost guilted into letting Tommy be "shared" with the rest of the family. Everyone just seems to be manipulating both of them. I don't know if your story is more going to lead to strengthening Freya into being more confident in herself and then not sharing, but I agree with the anon that this D/s relationship should be built around loyalty on both sides. Sure it started out as rape, as you said, but they came to a mutual conclusion and now it just seems like Tommy is betraying Freya. I feel so bad for her that her family just fucks with her the way they do. Honestly...I hate them and now Tommy too.

10/10. Morgan is so hot, and the way she speaks and her attitude is perfect,

@Kallamez How can you enjoy the sex if you don't like the other stuff? If someone wants to summarise, sure, but I'm not writing up a summary. My time is valuable! @jsmith2you I appreciate what you say dude, but understand that it is a story, and it's part of a bigger picture! If you feel the same way by the end, fair enough, but Freya is still the main girl and her relationship with Tom is still the main relationship, but I am primarily writing fiction and not a guide to D/s relationships. My stories are in no way a reflection of my views on anything, and entirely wank-schlick material, hahah. I'm happy I've provoked such passion in people, but it's far from over and this is absolutely not a "bad end" plotline. Things will get better!

I for one am loving the Morgan scenes it's so fucking hot !!!

This story has made me want and desire cum more and more. I have an older guy that i like to suck. I never liked semen at first. But now im learning to love it. Its interesting how the narrator in the story finds it so pathetic and perverse how much he wants his mistress seed and all those genes swimming inside. Theres something so erotic about making a nice thick cock ejaculate and being the cum dump and or receptive mouth another desires to deposit seed in. Very hot!!

You described the meeting of Moragan and Tom very beautifully, a wonderful blowjob made by Tom (I really like kissing, licking, sucking eggs, cock, asshole and asshole, and tasting this white nectar that is sperm ...), you showed me how to do it with such commitment, feeling, expression and full pleasure for both parties.

Unfortunately, although I identify with Tom very much, it hurt me a lot for the second time that Tom cheats on Freya, although she allowed the whole family to share Tom. However, I take it as a betrayal, as Tom reflects on it, thinks that he is cheating on his Lady. Is Tom so desperate to betray every single member of Freya's family? I will say that I saw it completely differently ... Tom will be like a dog guarding his Lady and will be faithful to her until the very death. Maybe I'm too old-fashioned, romantic, forgive Me @talaksański but I fell in love with your story and its heroes Freya and Tom. SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 💖🍀🌞

Bardzo pięknie opisałeś spotkanie Moragan i Toma, wspaniałego lodzika wykonanego przez Toma (sam bardzo lubię całować, lizać, ssać jajeczka, kutaska, dupkę i dziurkę dupki oraz smakować ten biały nektar jakim jest sperma...), pokazałeś Mi jak to robić z takim zaangażowaniem, uczuciem, ekspresją i pełną przyjemnością dla obu stron.

Niestety choć bardzo utożsamiam się z Tomem, to bardzo Mnie zabolało po raz drugi że Tom zdradza Freyi, choć Ona pozwoliła na dzielenie się Tomem przez całą rodzinę. Jednak Ja odbieram to jak zdradę, tak jak Tom się nad tym zastanawia, myśli o tym że zdradza swoją Panią. Czy aż tak Tom jest zdesperowany aby z każdą osobą z rodziny Freyi zdradzać ją? Powiem że widziałem to kompletnie inaczej... Tom będzie wręcz jak pies strzegł swojej Pani i będzie jej wierny aż do samej śmierci. Może jestem zbyt staromodny, romantyczny to wybacz Mi @talaksański ale zakochałem się w twojej historii i jej bohaterach Freyi i Tomie.

SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. 💖🍀🌞