All Comments on 'The New Girl Ch. 12'

Love it. Have been waiting for this chapter for so long. Can not wait for the next one. Keep up the great work.

Ooh, another sizzling chapter. Thought for a minute Tom might get his first taste of Persephone in the kitchen, so close! Very interested to see how the family dynamic ends up, if the Venyabilts all end up dominating Tom together (bukkake scene anyone??) and if we ever get to see the mysterious Gen take a crack at Tom. I hope so on both counts!

Excellent writing as always, thanks for submitting!

PS - your other stories on smashwords are also excellent! Hung Futa Daddy was my personal fav

Can you add worshiping their asses and rimming?

Keeps getting hotter and hotter

Beautifully paced. Not lazy writing at all. The subtle changes and shifts in the characters, the way they're growing is particularly well done.

So good, as always. I'd like to second my fellow anonymous commenter on the topic of more rimjobs please!

@Lordkalven Cheers, they're less regular now as I wanted more rotation among the Patreon picks, but it'll likely be one every three weeks or so! @ShouldIBeHere28 Yeah Persephone will get her time with Tom, just getting a firm story thread built to ensure people aren't losing their shit constantly, haha! Plus it helps me in turn, to have a focussed storyline! Gen won't appear in this particular story, though I may have her in another (darker) spinoff! And cheers for the praise, there'll be plenty more coming! @Anon I absolutely intend to, just haven't gotten there yet! @darthnader19 Glad you're enjoying it! @Anon2 Thanks for the kind words, I see it as very character-led, so I'm glad to hear it's doing the job!

This is hands down the best smut I've read in my entire life. So much so that I backed it up to a PDF in case anything terrible happens.

A great part of history, beautifully shown both personal, emotional, family, psychological, sexual aspects of the lives of individuals and the family as a whole. I am in love with the character of Tom and like him I love Freya. I would love to actually experience this love and submission to Freya.

Although I read your story many months after you wrote it Talaksański, I really have no words to express my admiration for such a beautiful and full of feeling and expressive story. I hope you will develop this story further and show how Freya and Tom's love developed, where it led them and their further experiences together and with other members of the Venyabildt families.

Greetings from Poland, from Warsaw SissyBoy (e-mail: wawa_ursynow@o2.pl)

Wspaniała część historii, pięknie ukazane zarówno osobiste, uczuciowe, rodzinne, psychologiczne, seksualne aspekty życia poszczególnych osób oraz rodziny w całości. Jestem zakochany w postaci Toma i tak jak On kocham Freyi. Bardzo chciałbym w rzeczywistości doświadczyć tej miłości oraz uległości wobec Freyi.

Choć Ja czytam twoją historię wiele miesięcy po napisaniu jej przez Ciebie Talaksański to na prawdę nie mam słów aby wyrazić dla Ciebie zachwytu za tak piękną i pełną uczucia a zarówno ekspresji historię. Mam nadzieję że rozwiniesz jeszcze tą historię i ukażesz jak rozwinęła się Miłość Freyi i Toma, dokąd doprowadziła ich oraz dalsze przeżycia ich wspólne jak i z innymi członkami rodzinami Venyabildt.

Pozdrawiam z Polski, z Warszawy SissyBoy (e-mail: wawa_ursynow@o2.pl)