All Comments on 'The New Girl Ch. 13'

by Thalaxian

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ShouldIBeHere28ShouldIBeHere28over 1 year ago

Niceeee, the long awaited group play is here! Love the chapter, story is moving in all sorts of interesting directions! Thanks for submitting!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Definitely know that it just keeps getting better from here on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This seems as it might be the end. A truly great series.

ThalaxianThalaxianover 1 year agoAuthor

@Anon Nope, not the end for a little while, hahah. More's yet to come. Other Anon know what up, though. @ShouldIBeHere28 Glad you enjoyed it, this one's always popular with my Patrons so I'm sure there'll be another very shortly!

LordkalvenLordkalvenover 1 year ago

Hey there big man. Great story. How soo. Till we see a new chapter. Keep it up man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

@talaksański is a great story, you beautifully captured both love, friendship, taking care of someone weaker, younger, family feelings as well as jealousy, submission or emotions of fear. In this chapter 13 you have wonderfully portrayed the sex between Freya, Tom, Morgan and in particular you have shown the sisters' love for each other and both of them for Tom. I would like to be like Tom, I loved Tom's person and I got used to him.

I am already impatiently waiting for the next parts of the story of Freya, Tom and the Venyabildt family. Kind regards from Warsaw, Poland. SissyBoy.

@talaksański to wspaniała historia, pięknie ująłeś zarówno miłość, przyjaźń, opiekowanie się kimś słabszym, młodszym, uczucia rodzinne jak i zazdrość, uległość czy emocje strachu. W tym 13 rozdziale cudownie ukazałeś seks pomiędzy Freyą, Tomem, Morgan a w szczególność ukazałeś miłość sióstr do siebie a zarówno ich do Toma. Chciałbym być jak Tom, pokochałem osobę Toma i zżyłem się z jego osobą.

Już niecierpliwie czekam na kolejne części historii Freyi, Toma i rodziny Venyabildt. Pozdrawiam serdecznie z Warszawy, Polska. SissyBoy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story, would love to see this continued. Especially the sisters getting involved with each other or their parents is very appealing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Amazing story line, the best in this category I've ever read. Thank you so much. I'm gonna keep checking hoping for further chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I really hope you do more chapters this is incredible

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